Suppose you are correcting some literary essays. In one essay, you find the following extract.
“It begins with the Giant coming back to his garden after a seven-year trip. When arriving they see that children play in his garden." (source: a real student's essay)
The mistake that directly affects the cohesion of the extract is the/a:
“It begins with the Giant coming back to his garden after a seven-year trip. When arriving they see that children play in his garden." (source: a real student's essay)
The mistake that directly affects the cohesion of the extract is the/a:
